ext_276257 ([identity profile] georgie1700.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brighteyedjill 2007-12-17 06:26 pm (UTC)

Fabulous fan fiction which I've added to my memories

because I definitely don't want to lose such a well-crafted and well-written story which had me glued to the screen these last couple of days.

Thank you for creating. Plus sharing your amazing imagination and talent with us.

I love how you have written all the characters but especially how you have written Nathan. He just jumps off the screen for me. Also Gabriel made me see him as Gabriel and not Sylar though Sylar came out when he thought Mohinder had died.

I love how you captured the nuances of Nathan's character, for example, Nathan finding it hard to express what it is he really needs(Peter). One of my many favorite lines in the story is when Peter tells Nathan, "I know the heart of you." because Peter knows what Nathan cannot express.

Another favorite part of the story is the Peter and Gabriel interaction.

Oooh, I almost forgot to mention how much I love the "Sneetches." That made me smule because that one of my favorite stories when I was growing up.

This last chapter had everything a girl could want and more. It wassuperb and the epilogue gorgeous.

Thank you again for sharing and creating such a magnificent tale.

More delicious stories please, when you are able to create them because I will read them delightfully.

georgie1700

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