Well first of all, thanks! You're making me blush! I know that the "next chapter" button can be so tempting. Many is the night I've stayed up long past bedtime just to get to the end of an excellent story...

I'm glad this story reminded you of the style of the show. One of my goals in writing this was to pattern it after the show itself, complete with multiple inter-woven storylines and pesky cliffhangers. I loved the first season of Heroes, and as I started to become a little frustrated by some of the season two storylines, it only inspired me to avoid the same pitfalls with my story. So ultimately I think I benefited from the writers' woes this season! I'm glad the characters matched with your mental image of the show-- there's nothing like hearing dialogue in the actor's voice (or as you said, seeing their faces in the scenes) to make it come to life.

Thanks so much for your kind words. Comments are love!