ext_81366 ([identity profile] tactile-contact.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brighteyedjill 2011-05-25 04:40 pm (UTC)

This is beautiful. I'll echo the others' thoughts on how perfectly you handled the narrative, to let us experience what John was experiencing as we move along. Very well done!

I love the tango reference, that John turns it on Sherlock to remind him that they must work together.

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