Yay! I love to see that people are still getting enjoyment out of this fic, even years later. I set out to write this in the style of the show, which is very much intertwined stories of various characters. It was sometimes maddening, though, trying to keep all that straight. It definitely gave me some sympathy for the people who write the show!
As for Gabriel/Mohinder... That snuck up on me, too. I'm not traditionally a Mylar girl, but reformed!Gabriel just demanded that the story go this way, and you do NOT argue with Sylar (see case in point, end of volume 4!)
Anyway, I'm glad that all the elements worked for you. It was a blast writing this monster. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a thoughtful comment-- it means a lot!
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Date: 2009-05-21 05:22 pm (UTC)As for Gabriel/Mohinder... That snuck up on me, too. I'm not traditionally a Mylar girl, but reformed!Gabriel just demanded that the story go this way, and you do NOT argue with Sylar (see case in point, end of volume 4!)
Anyway, I'm glad that all the elements worked for you. It was a blast writing this monster. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a thoughtful comment-- it means a lot!