Just lovely. I love the feel of the whole piece - even though they're standing in an open field, it feels so intimate. Peter's fear and Nathan's steadfast reassurance all seem so natural. As do the undercurrents of Peter's anxiety that his father's violation has changed him in more ways than one, leaving him worthless. And the dialogue! It's perfect.
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sforzinda
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Date: 2008-11-30 08:49 pm (UTC)I really loved this. Could you send it to Kring?