This is beautiful. I'll echo the others' thoughts on how perfectly you handled the narrative, to let us experience what John was experiencing as we move along. Very well done!
I love the tango reference, that John turns it on Sherlock to remind him that they must work together.
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Date: 2011-05-25 04:40 pm (UTC)I love the tango reference, that John turns it on Sherlock to remind him that they must work together.