Date: 2009-05-10 07:29 am (UTC)
Dom Peter! There's something you don't see every day. I love the way you've approached this: it's almost like he's punishing the man he used to be. Heh. Even when he's pretending to be a top, Peter can't shake his masochistic, submissive instincts (go with them, boy, they suit you beautifully!).

Is this the kind of man Peter is now? The hard, appraising bastard who can snap his finger and have another man on his knees? Peter thinks of the future self he’d met, the one with the scar and the anger. The one they’d called a terrorist. Yeah, he probably is that type of man.

Perfect angry/disillusioned Peter introspection there. It's that sort of psychological insight into the characters that makes your fics more than just hot kink. Although, it was definitely hot as well.

Fantastic work!
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